tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2464022958496364625.post7977319817419850344..comments2023-03-25T12:15:03.614+00:00Comments on Mark's Mutterings: Ode to Bukowski's WordsMuttering Markhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03043683629213636002noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2464022958496364625.post-78934803145507908862009-10-07T19:56:50.756+01:002009-10-07T19:56:50.756+01:00thank you, there's always peoms because there ...thank you, there's always peoms because there are always thoughts.Muttering Markhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03043683629213636002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2464022958496364625.post-58666490139190006622009-10-07T19:42:27.565+01:002009-10-07T19:42:27.565+01:00This is a definite favorite of mine from your work...This is a definite favorite of mine from your works thus far. The moment captured in this poem is unmistakingly heavy with feeling. I love the colors in it, I'm not sure if you understand what I mean by that but there are deep reds, misty grays, cork bottled browns, even an Earth green tone to this poem. Also, your word choice "melt" "monotonous" is so precise and very fitting. Overall, I enjoyed reading it and I hope you continue to write more.<br />XOXO<br />Jamie Nicole<br />http://reasons2forget.blogspot.comJamie Nicolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10907512056256745230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2464022958496364625.post-7564334335414689172009-10-06T01:02:35.448+01:002009-10-06T01:02:35.448+01:00i like your poems...your imagery
i also enjoyed th...i like your poems...your imagery<br />i also enjoyed the most recent post, the story about the office...you write well<br />if you fell so inclined you can stop by my page and check out my poetry<br />angstandagony.blogspot.com<br /><br />peaceAudacity of Sagacityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03907766564701828457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2464022958496364625.post-37312574960419307482009-10-05T11:16:44.359+01:002009-10-05T11:16:44.359+01:00written at a different time in my lifewritten at a different time in my lifeMuttering Markhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03043683629213636002noreply@blogger.com